here's my honest opinion.
I know you for years, so you know i am going to buy it. I am going to speak in a business/honest way as if I didn't know you. I want you to make as much money as you can.
1)there are not enough pictures, All I can see is the logo?
2) it looks like an M + J hybrid to me. I don't see the Jedi on it.
most hoodies are 10$ to 40$. basically, I'm paying for the brand of the logo.
3) Jedi-mindtricks sounds marketable, I like the sound of it. I would wear it as if I am wearing new york Yankees hoodies. it's like a cool hip way of saying '' enlightenment''.
4) ur using the name Jedi which is linked to star wars. it's a catchy name. and Lucas arts cannot sue you because of your brand Jedi-mind which is different from Jedi.
now the negatives:
your logo doesn't say Jedi. I don't see it. If I saw this in a store, I might skip it.
now if your logo looks more like a Jedi then it will capture my attention quickly.